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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant for secondary students at E4U English center as advertised in the Tuoi Tre newspaper.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant for secondary students at E4U English center as advertised in the Tuoi Tre newspaper. obPrB
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant for secondary students at E4U English center as advertised in the Tuoi Tre newspaper. I am a third-year student at Danang University of Foreign Language Studies. I got Vsteps certificate at B2 level. I also completed a course as a teaching assistant at Inspire English center. I have been working as an English tutor for three years. I can empathize with secondary students’ problems when it comes to learning English and know quite clearly which mistakes they usually make. Prior to this, I had the experience of being a teaching assistant at Inspire English center for seven months. From my experience, I am able to deal with classroom problems. I have some qualities that are required for this position. For instance, I am a well-adjusted patient person and have a sense of humor. Moreover, I am willing to work under pressure and work for long hours when there are a number of tasks to do. I have enclosed a copy of my CV and would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. Yours faithfully, Ong Thi Xuan Mai
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant for secondary students at E4U English center as advertised in the
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Tuoi
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Tre
newspaper.

I am a third-year student at
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Danang
University of Foreign Language Studies.
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I
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got
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Vsteps
certificate at B2 level.
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I
also
completed a course as a teaching assistant at Inspire English center.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been working as an English tutor for three years.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can empathize with secondary students’ problems when it
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comes
to learning English and know quite
clearly
which mistakes they
usually
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make
. Prior to this, I had the experience of being a teaching assistant at Inspire English center for seven months. From my experience, I am able to deal with classroom problems.

I have
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some
qualities that
are required
for this position.
For instance
, I am a well-adjusted patient person and have a sense of humor.
Moreover
, I am willing to work under pressure and work for long hours when there are a number of tasks to do.

I have enclosed a copy of my CV and would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ong
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Thi
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Xuan
Mai
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IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apply for the position of teaching assistant for secondary students at E4U English center as advertised in the Tuoi Tre newspaper.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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