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You are going to be absent from your English class next week

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Dear my teacher, I’m writing a letter today to be absent from my English class next week. On 17 August 2021, my family have gone in Las Vegas to engage in wedding of my uncle. I must go early to prepare in everything before on week such as: flowers, wedding cake, wine, booked dress and vest for my bridge and so on. I’m apologize for my teacher not to be study Math with a good lesson. I called for Linh to give my exams and asked me my homework which is give from my teacher. Phong promised me to study Math that is have done in my school. Thank you for reading from my cute student of teacher Love, Bich
Dear my teacher,

I’m writing a letter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
to be absent from my English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
next
week. On
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
17 August 2021
, my family have gone in Las Vegas to engage in wedding of my uncle. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go early to prepare in everything
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
on week such as: flowers, wedding cake, wine, booked dress and vest for my bridge and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. I’m
Consider using a past participle here: "apologized".
apologize
for my teacher not to be study Math with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
lesson.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
called for
Possible spelling mistake found.
Linh
to give my exams and asked me my homework which is give from my teacher.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phong
promised me to study Math
that is
Consider using a past participle here: "had".
have
done in my school. Thank you for reading from my cute student of teacher

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Bich
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IELTS letter You are going to be absent from your English class next week

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
119 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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