To: Mr John
From: The Tai
Subject: Recommendations for the better magazine
Introduction
This report aims to list the things are popular with the young and make some suggestions about the areas should be displayed in the magazine.
Popular things
First off, in the modern society, there are more thing...
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Dear my teacher,
I’m writing a letter today to be absent from my English class next week. On 17 August 2021, my family have gone in Las Vegas to engage in wedding of my uncle. I must go early to prepare in everything before on week such as: flowers, wedding cake, wine, booked dress and vest for my bridge and so on. I’m apologize for my teacher not to be study Math with a good lesson. I called for Linh to give my exams and asked me my homework which is give from my teacher. Phong promised me to study Math that is have done in my school. Thank you for reading from my cute student of teacher
Love,
Bich
Dear my teacher,
I’m writing a letter to be absent from my English , my family have gone in Las Vegas to engage in wedding of my uncle. I go early to prepare in everything on week such as: flowers, wedding cake, wine, booked dress and vest for my bridge and on. I’m for my teacher not to be study Math with a lesson. called for to give my exams and asked me my homework which is give from my teacher. promised me to study Math done in my school. Thank you for reading from my cute student of teacher
,
I’m writing a letter
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todayThis phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
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week. On The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
17 August 2021This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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IELTS letter You are going to be absent from your English class next week
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