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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done 75VY2
Dear Sir or Madam, My husband and I had the pleasure to visit the cinema this Friday at 15. 00p. m, but unfortunately, when we were watching the “The conjuring” movie, I found out that I left my jacket on the chair I was sitting in by accident. The jacket is made of black leather with grey metal buttons on the both sleeves and yellow stripes going down the arms. Also, the logo “H/M” is printed on the chest area and a bright red lining inside the jacket is sewn. On the top of the jacket two big pockets are attached. The jacket was tailor-made and means a lot to me, because the jacket was presented to me by my husband as a gift. Unfortunately, I threw away the tickets we bought that day, and I cannot provide them. But I managed to recollect that we have purchased the tickets in row D and set up in D'BOX seats 14 and 15. I would appreciate, if you could take a look around the chairs in the cinema and try to find this leather jacket, if possible. It also might have fallen behind the chair and onto the floor. If you found it, I could swing by and pick it up at any time. tel. 555-78-5454 Thank you for your help! Best regards, Alex Minich
Dear Sir or Madam,

My husband and I had the pleasure to visit the cinema this Friday at 15. 00p.
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m
,
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but
unfortunately, when we were watching
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the “The
conjuring” movie, I found out that I
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left
my
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jacket
on the chair I was sitting in by accident.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
is made
of black leather with
Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.
grey
metal buttons on the both sleeves and yellow stripes going down the arms.
Also
, the logo “H/M”
is printed
on the chest area and a bright red lining inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
is sewn
. On the top of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
pockets
are attached
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
was tailor-made and means a lot to me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
was presented
to me by my husband as a gift.

Unfortunately, I threw away the tickets we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
that day, and I cannot provide them.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I managed to recollect that we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
the tickets in row D and set up in D'BOX seats 14 and 15.

I would appreciate, if you could take a look around the chairs in the cinema and try to find this leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jacket
, if possible. It
also
might have fallen behind the chair and onto the floor. If you found it, I could swing by and pick it up at any time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
tel
. 555-78-5454

Thank you for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
!

Best regards,

Alex
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Minich
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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  American English
8 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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