To: Mr John
From: The Tai
Subject: Recommendations for the better magazine
Introduction
This report aims to list the things are popular with the young and make some suggestions about the areas should be displayed in the magazine.
Popular things
First off, in the modern society, there are more things that young adults concern to read or watch. For instance, music is an area that they often pay their attention to. Besides, some teenagers are taking the fashion into account. They enjoy wearing the beautiful clothes and then taking photos, which are posted on social network. On the other hand, we can't mention the familiar kinds of entertainments such as games, sports or films and the viral information about famous people, stars, etc as well.
Recommendations
However, the editors should organise the above subjects in an appropriate way. On the cover page, for example, the information should be the hottest news in day. After that, on each page they can add one area with the upcoming events, trends or reviews related to that. Furthermore, you ought to combine the news with photos instead of writing too much, which makes the readers bored and not want to read.
In conclusion, in my view, I have some suggestions for you to improve the magazine for young people. You can reference and make changes for better one.
To: Mr John
From: The Tai
Subject: Recommendations for the better magazine
Introduction
This report aims to list the things are popular with the young and
make
some
suggestions about the areas should
be displayed
in the magazine.
Popular things
First
off, in the modern society, there are more things that young adults concern to read or
watch
.
For instance
, music is an area that they
often
pay their attention to.
Besides
,
some
teenagers
are taking the fashion into account. They enjoy wearing the
beautiful
clothes and then taking photos, which
are posted
on social network.
On the other hand
, we can't mention the familiar kinds of entertainments such as games, sports or films and the viral information about
famous
people
, stars, etc
as well
.
Recommendations
However
, the editors should
organise
the above subjects
in an appropriate way
. On the cover page,
for example
, the information should be the hottest news in day. After that, on each page they can
add
one area with the upcoming
events
, trends or reviews related to that.
Furthermore
, you ought to combine the news with photos
instead
of writing too much, which
makes
the readers bored and not want to read.
In conclusion
, in my view, I have
some
suggestions for you to
improve
the magazine for young
people
. You can reference and
make
changes
for better one.