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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties gpoL

Dear Sam, Thank you for accepting my request of looking after my house while I go on a much-needed break. As I have mentioned, it will be only for a week. I can be reached at 0416353535 during this time. I may not be available to answer your call immediately so please leave me a message and I shall return your call. I do like to reiterate the care instruction I provided already for my macaw. He responds promptly when I call him Jack. He is very demanding most of the time, especially during the evening meal. He has also memorized some sentences such as “How are you? ” and some words from songs. When he sings this is usually the time for when he needs a person to respond back His food is stored in the compartment above the microwave labeled superfood. Please ensure you only feed him with two to three meals in a day, each meal not exceeding three spoons of superfood. I have made sure that the entire house is cleaned however if Jack is roaming about, you may find some animal waste and feathers. Please use the vacuum stored in the storage area to clean. This is to avoid any unwanted pests in the house. Once again, I thank you for helping me out on this. Your mate Saqib Bhimani

Dear Sam,

Thank you for accepting my request of looking after my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 while I go on a much-needed break. As I have mentioned, it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for a week. I can be reached
 at 0416353535 during this time. I may not be available to answer your call immediately This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 me a message and I shall return your call.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 do like to reiterate the care instruction I provided already for my macaw. He responds promptly
 when I call him Jack. He is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 demanding most of the time, especially
 during the evening meal. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
 has also
 memorized This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sentences such as “How are you? ” and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 words from songs. When he sings this is usually
 the time for when he needs a person to respond back His food is stored
 in the compartment above the microwave labeled superfood. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 ensure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 feed him with two to three meals in a day, each meal not exceeding three spoons of superfood.

I have made sure that the entire This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
is cleaned
however
 if Jack is roaming about, you may find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 animal waste and feathers. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the vacuum stored in the storage area to clean. This is to avoid any unwanted pests in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

Once again, I thank you for helping me out on this.

Your mate

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Saqib
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Bhimani