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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. 2Xpo
Dear Rebecca, How have you been? Hope your husband and your kid are doing great. Things are cool here as well. Received your letter couple of days back. You have been inviting me to your country for more than six months now. I can understand that it is a christmas season in london right now and it would be awesome. So, I decided that I will definitely come over this time. I need few details from you though before I pack my bags. To start with, I have been planning to buy something for your husband and to your kid Jessica. So suggest me what type of gifts would be very useful to them and also you shouldn't get those things over there. I am planning to spend around 25 days over there. So, what kind of activities I can indulge in after reaching there? Also, I need to buy the clothings before I start. What kind of costumes people wear over there? It 'll help me to buy things accordingly. You already knew that I am a big foodie. I need to know about the variety of foods over there. Since I'm going to stay for almost a month, Food plays a vital role. Just give me an heads up about the things I mentioned above, It will help me to plan my vacation perfectly. Waiting for your response and Can't wait to catch you in London very soon. Warm regards, Anderson.
Dear Rebecca,

How have you been? Hope your husband and your kid are doing great. Things are cool here
as well
. Received your letter couple of days back. You have been inviting me to your country for more than six months
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now
. I can understand that it is a
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christmas
season in
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london
right
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now
and it would be awesome.
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So
, I decided that I will definitely
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come
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over
this time. I need few
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details
from you though
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before
I pack my bags.

To
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start
with, I have been planning to
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buy
something for your husband and to your kid Jessica.
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So
suggest me what type of gifts would be
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very
useful to them and
also
you shouldn't
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get
those things
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over
there.

I am planning to spend around 25 days
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over
there.
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So
, what kind of activities I can indulge in after reaching there?
Also
, I need to
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buy
the
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clothings
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before
I
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start
. What kind of costumes
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people
wear
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over
there? It 'll
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help
me to
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buy
things
accordingly
.

You already knew that I am a
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big
foodie. I need to know about the variety of foods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
over
there. Since I'm going to stay for almost a month, Food plays a vital role.
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Just
give me
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an
heads up about the things I mentioned above, It will
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help
me to plan my vacation
perfectly
.

Waiting for your response and Can't wait to catch you in London
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very
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soon
.

Warm regards,

Anderson.
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
243 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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