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There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should:IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 (29-3-2021) IELTS FEVER 29/03/2021 Day Wise Tests No Comments IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 Must Read These Instructions before participating in Exam The answer to each and every question is mandatory otherwise we will not accept it. Send your answers to [email protected] with your name, city along with the question( in the subject field of email), and must send us the answer within 24 hours of the question. We will not respond to late answers and without a name, question no answer will be considered. IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1 The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report

There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 (29-3-2021) IELTS FEVER 29/03/2021 Day Wise Tests No Comments IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 Must Read These Instructions before participating in Exam The answer to each and every question is mandatory otherwise we will not accept it. Send your answers to help@ieltsfever. com with your name, city along with the question( in the subject field of email), and must send us the answer within 24 hours of the question. We will not respond to late answers and without a name, question no answer will be considered. IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1 The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. 7Bkk
Dear Priyanka, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am articulating this epistle to invite you to my town to take part in a public event that is dance. The event will be near Eqbal Inn Hotel, Patiala on 10th April 2021 and will start at 10 am. going on to take part. This event is happening first time in my town and anyone can participate in it. It will be organized by a famous Madhuri Dance Academy. Online registration is going on to take part. The winner of this event will get a cash prize of Rs1 Lakh and along with that lifetime free dance workshops by their academy which is a very huge thing as the starting price of their each workshop is Rs1000 and plethora of celebrities visit here. I think you will be interested in this event as you're a splendid dancer. You not only performed in a plethora of dance competitions but won that also. You're very passionate about your dance from your childhood and even you did a lot of struggle and hard work in your life. You can do all kinds of dance styles and you're always ready for a dance battle. To participate, you've to bring the song in pendrive or CD and costumes or jewellery for dance performance because they won't provide anything in the event. Hoping to see you in the event. With regards, Ishika Goyal
Dear Priyanka,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am articulating this epistle to invite you to my town to
take part
in a public
event
that is
dance.

The
event
will be near
Eqbal
Inn Hotel,
Patiala
on 10th April 2021 and will
start
at 10 am. going on to
take part
. This
event
is happening
first
time in my town and anyone can participate in it. It will 
be organized
by a
famous
Madhuri
Dance
Academy. Online registration is going on to
take part
. The winner of this
event
will
get
a cash prize of Rs1 Lakh and along with that lifetime free
dance
workshops by their academy which is a
very
huge thing as the starting price of their each workshop is Rs1000 and plethora of celebrities visit here.

I
think
you will
be interested
in this
event
as you're a splendid dancer. You not
only
performed in a plethora of
dance
competitions
but
won that
also
. You're
very
passionate about your
dance
from your childhood and even you did
a lot of struggle
and
hard
work in your life.
You
can do all kinds of
dance
styles and you're always ready for a
dance
battle.

To participate, you've to bring the song in
pendrive
or CD and costumes or
jewellery
for
dance
performance
because
they won't provide anything in the
event
.

Hoping to
see
you in the
event
.

With regards,
Ishika
Goyal
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IELTS letter There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 (29-3-2021) IELTS FEVER 29/03/2021 Day Wise Tests No Comments IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 Must Read These Instructions before participating in Exam The answer to each and every question is mandatory otherwise we will not accept it. Send your answers to help@ieltsfever. com with your name, city along with the question( in the subject field of email), and must send us the answer within 24 hours of the question. We will not respond to late answers and without a name, question no answer will be considered. IELTSFever FREE Online Test Day 79 ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1 The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011.

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