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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Hi Steve, I hope that you and your family is in the pink of health. As you know, I have applied to the University of Toronto for my PG course. I got accepted to the university and I am coming to Canada next month. I will be staying there for two years till the course ends. Since my family could not afford for my studies, I am planning to take a part-time job there. This will immensely help me for my semester fees and for my living. I can work in the evening shifts or an early morning shifts, which does not affect my classes. I know that you are working as a manager in a restaurant. I would like to take up any job in the same restaurant as yours. Please consider my request and let me know if any vacancies are available in the restaurant you work. I am eagerly waiting for your reply and I appreciate your effort. See you soon, Grace
Hi Steve,

I hope that you and your family is in the pink of health. As you know, I have applied to the University of Toronto for my PG course. I
got
accepted
to the university and I am coming to Canada
next
month. I will be staying there for two years till the course ends.

Since my family could not afford for my studies, I am planning to take a part-time job there. This will
immensely
help
me for my semester fees and for my living. I can work in the evening shifts or an early morning shifts, which does not affect my classes.

I know that you are working as a manager in a restaurant. I would like to take up any job in the same restaurant as yours.
Please
consider my request and
let
me know if any vacancies are available in the restaurant you work.

I am
eagerly
waiting for your reply and I appreciate your effort.

See
you
soon
,

Grace
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IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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