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You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow. Write an email to Tyler Say: where you want to meet what time you want to meet what you want to buy. Write 25 words or more.

You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow. Write an email to Tyler Say: where you want to meet what time you want to meet what you want to buy. Write 25 words or more. 3MoaX
Dear Tyler How are you doing? I hope you are going well. Do you remember to go shopping with me tomorrow? I am writing to remind you about the meeting. I will wait for you at the park in which we had watched the boat racing before. What time do you want to meet? I think it would be fantastic to meet at 8am in the morning? It is the good time to walk. For me, I would like to purchase a new laptop so that we can visit the electrical store. Modern laptop will be perfect for learning online. Particularly, the latest album of Taylor Swift, which I am really appreciated, have been released in the first week of May. Consequently, we can get a CD at the store. In addition, Peter’s birthday party is coming, I intend to give him a special thing. Can you recommend me some idea? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Dear Tyler

How are you doing? I hope you are going well.

Do you remember to go shopping with me tomorrow? I am writing to remind you about the meeting. I will wait for you at the park in which we had
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watched
the boat racing
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before
. What time do you want to
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meet
? I
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think
it would be fantastic to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
at 8am in the morning? It is the
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good
time to walk. For me, I would like to
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purchase
a new laptop
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so
that we can visit the electrical store. Modern laptop will be perfect for learning online.
Particularly
, the latest album of Taylor Swift, which I am
really
appreciated, have
been released
in the
first
week of May.
Consequently
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a CD at the store.
In addition
, Peter’s birthday party is coming, I intend to give him a special thing. Can you recommend me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
?

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter You are going shopping with your English friend Tyler tomorrow. Write an email to Tyler Say: where you want to meet what time you want to meet what you want to buy. Write 25 words or more.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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