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You are going on vacation and leaving your dog with a caretaker. Please write a message to the caretaker explaining what she needs to know for taking care of the dog.

You are going on vacation and leaving your dog with a caretaker. Please write a message to the caretaker explaining what she needs to know for taking care of the dog. RWonY
Dear Nathalie It is a pleasusre to comunicate with you. I am going to travel to Europe for 2 months, and mi little puppy will be with you those weeks. So pay attention about his neededs. His name is Doky, you must go to the park three times a week, and carry two paper bags or plastic as long as it be recyclable. For example: In the moorning around 6 to 8, in the evenning around 12 to 1 and finally at night almost 7 to 9. Actually it is the same routine. The food is in the refrigerato in many differents bags with the necesary food for a day. He is very friendly and kind. He loves that people give love all time. Finally, Doky goes to the veterinarian two times a month so keep listening because he had lost the last date, and is elementary and valuable for me his live and his health. The name of the doctor is Ben Tarrilo, it is an adult doctor and amazing. He loves Doky and Doke loves him. I hope you can have a great relationship with my little pyppy. Enjoy the time and remember he hates be alone. See you soon Nathali
Dear Nathalie

It is a
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pleasusre
to
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comunicate
with you. I am going to travel to Europe for 2 months, and mi
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little
puppy will be with you those weeks.
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So
pay attention about his
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neededs
.

His name is
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Doky
, you
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must
go to the park three
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times
a week, and carry two paper bags or plastic as long as it
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be
recyclable.
For example
: In the
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moorning
around 6 to 8, in the
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evenning
around 12 to 1 and
finally
at night almost 7 to 9. Actually it is the same routine.

The food is in the
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refrigerato
in
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many
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differents
bags with the
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necesary
food for a day. He is
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very
friendly and kind. He
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loves
that
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people
give
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love
all
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time
.
Finally
,
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Doky
goes to the veterinarian two
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times
a month
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so
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keep
listening
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because
he had lost the last date, and is elementary and valuable for me his
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live
and his health. The name of the doctor is Ben
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Tarrilo
, it is an adult doctor and amazing. He
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loves
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Doky
and
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Doke
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loves
him.

I hope you can have a great relationship with my
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little
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pyppy
. Enjoy the
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time
and remember he hates be alone.

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See
you
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soon
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Nathali

IELTS letter You are going on vacation and leaving your dog with a caretaker. Please write a message to the caretaker explaining what she needs to know for taking care of the dog.

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