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You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • explain why you are looking for a new job. • describe the kind of job you would like to have. • ask your friend to help you find a job.

You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • explain why you are looking for a new job. • describe the kind of job you would like to have. • ask your friend to help you find a job. mkGn
Dear Eric, I want to let you know that I have decided to seek new employment. My current job is no longer interesting to me. I would like to find more challenging work soon, and I am hoping that you can help me. My current job at a small accounting firm has become very routine. When I started here five years ago, everything about the work interested me. I had little experience at the time, and I had a lot to learn. But now the work has become boring. It seems that every new client we get is the same as the last. I would like to find a more challenging position at a larger accounting firm. Then, I would have the opportunity to work with a wider variety of clients. I would also have more chances to advance at a larger firm. I hope you don't mind if I ask you for some help. Perhaps you can suggest some larger firms to which I could send my resume. I know you have many contacts in accounting since you have worked in this field for years. I would really appreciate any suggestions you might have for me. Yours truly, Elisabeth
Dear Eric,

I want to
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let
you know that I have decided to seek new employment. My

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current
job is no longer interesting to me. I would like to find more challenging

work
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soon
, and I am hoping that you can
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help
me.

My
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current
job at a
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small
accounting firm has become
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very
routine. When

I
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started
here five years ago, everything about the work interested me.

I had
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little
experience at the time, and I had a lot to learn.
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But
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now
the work

has become boring. It seems that every new client we
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get
is the same as

the last.

I would like to find a more challenging position at a larger accounting firm.

Then, I would have the opportunity to work with a wider variety of clients.

I would
also
have more chances to advance at a larger firm.

I hope you don't mind if I ask you for
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some
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help
. Perhaps you can suggest

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some
larger firms to which I could
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send
my resume. I know you have
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many


contacts in accounting since you have worked in this field for years.

I would
really
appreciate any suggestions you might have for me.

Yours
truly
,

Elisabeth
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IELTS letter You have decided to look for a new job. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • explain why you are looking for a new job. • describe the kind of job you would like to have. • ask your friend to help you find a job.

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  American English
11 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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