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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have BJm7d
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a notice that was attached along with the training programme broucher. It is indeed a wonderful opportunity for participants like me to be selected as a event organiser, I happy to express my intrest for this role. Prior to the selection process, could you provide me additional information on the eligiblity criteria, qualification required and responsiblities to be borne. For instance, are you looking for people with a event organizing experiences or a person with field of study in event manging. To debrief you about my experiences, I hold a masters degree in business administration, and have 4 years of experiences in event mangement at sharpners academy. I hold a qualified certificate in event managment and have been awarded as the best event manager in 2016 at the resort concert event. You can find additional details in google by just typing my name. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Daze
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to a notice that
was attached
along with the training
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programme
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broucher
. It is
indeed
a wonderful opportunity for participants like me to
be selected
as
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a
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event
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organiser
,
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I
happy to express my
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intrest
for this role.

Prior to the selection process, could you provide me additional information on the
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eligiblity
criteria, qualification required and
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responsiblities
to
be borne
.
For instance
, are you looking for
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people
with
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a
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event
organizing experiences or a person with field of study in
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event
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manging
.

To debrief you about my experiences, I hold a
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masters
degree in business administration, and have 4 years of experiences in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
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mangement
at
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sharpners
academy. I hold a qualified certificate in
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event
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managment
and have
been awarded
as the best
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event
manager in 2016 at the resort concert
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
. You can find additional
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details
in google by
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just
typing my name.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Daze
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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