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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Sir, My name is katerine saavedra, i currently a participant of the coming training programme in UK. The purpose to email you is express my strong interest in the available role of social events' organiser. Yesterday, i received only ad of this role by email, but it is not enough to complete the requirements. So, kindly, i would like to request more specific information such as documents, certificates and experience i will need for the application. As you know everyone have knowledge and experience to get this position, but this time i can be the right professional, because since two years ago i am the person who manages and leads the events in our company so i have the habilities and skills to enjoy this role. I'm really glad that we have this opportunity to get promoted and get more experience. Below i left my details. Yours Faithfully Katerine saavedra ktsss888@gmail. com +61498290876
Dear Sir,

My name is
katerine
saavedra
, i
currently
a participant of the coming training
programme
in UK. The purpose to email you is express my strong interest in the available role of social
events
'
organiser
.

Yesterday,
i
received
only
ad of this role by email,
but
it is not
enough
to complete the requirements.
So
, kindly,
i
would like to request more specific information such as documents, certificates and experience
i
will need for the application.

As you know everyone
have
knowledge and experience to
get
this position,
but
this time
i
can be the right professional,
because
since two years ago
i
am the person who manages and leads the
events
in our
company
so
i
have the
habilities
and
skills
to enjoy this role.

I'm
really
glad that we have this opportunity to
get
promoted and
get
more experience.

Below
i
left
my
details
.

Yours
Faithfully


Katerine
saavedra


ktsss888@gmail.
com


+61498290876
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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