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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Sir, My name is katerine saavedra, i currently a participant of the coming training programme in UK. The purpose to email you is express my strong interest in the available role of social events' organiser. Yesterday, i received only ad of this role by email, but it is not enough to complete the requirements. So, kindly, i would like to request more specific information such as documents, certificates and experience i will need for the application. As you know everyone have knowledge and experience to get this position, but this time i can be the right professional, because since two years ago i am the person who manages and leads the events in our company so i have the habilities and skills to enjoy this role. I'm really glad that we have this opportunity to get promoted and get more experience. Below i left my details. Yours Faithfully Katerine saavedra ktsss888@gmail. com +61498290876
Dear Sir,

My name is
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katerine
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saavedra
, i
currently
a participant of the coming training
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programme
in UK. The purpose to email you is express my strong interest in the available role of social
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events
'
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organiser
.

Yesterday,
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i
received
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only
ad of this role by email,
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but
it is not
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enough
to complete the requirements.
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So
, kindly,
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i
would like to request more specific information such as documents, certificates and experience
Did you mean “I”?
i
will need for the application.

As you know everyone
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have
knowledge and experience to
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get
this position,
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but
this time
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i
can be the right professional,
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because
since two years ago
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i
am the person who manages and leads the
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events
in our
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company
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so
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i
have the
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habilities
and
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skills
to enjoy this role.

I'm
really
glad that we have this opportunity to
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get
promoted and
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get
more experience.

Below
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i
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left
my
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details
.

Yours
Faithfully


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Katerine
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saavedra


ktsss888@gmail.
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com


+61498290876

IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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8 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have