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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area, Mention about the current sports facilities available What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Dear Sir, I am penning down this epistle to request you please provide some new sports facilities to the young people of this area. My name is Alex and I am a resident of Brampton city flower. I am currently working as an employee in the Scotia bank. I want to draw your attention to the poor sports facilities in my town. Presently, there is only one school playground where just children can play football and volleyball in limited hours. However, people like my age who are currently doing their jobs do not get time for playing. Sir, there is a vacant yard next to the school, which has become a dumping spot for people to throw garbage and other waste material. This area comes under the municipal corporation. I think it would be an ideal place to open an indoor stadium for games like tennis and badminton. It is my humble request to use this area like a stadium New sports facilities would not only benefit young office goers but also children and youth of this area. Apart from this, such a place is much needed as we are leading a sedentary lifestyle, and physical exercise is imperative to maintain a healthy body. Hoping for careful consideration of this suggestion. Yours faithfully, Alex

Dear Sir,

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 like a stadium

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only
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also
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area
. Apart from this, such a place is much needed as we are leading a sedentary lifestyle, and physical exercise is imperative to maintain a healthy body.

Hoping for careful consideration of this suggestion.

Yours faithfully
,

Alex