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You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter,    explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in the position of restaurant manager that was advertised in the “Times of India” newspaper on 21st, June 2020. I have completed the hospitality management course at Nirma University. Also, I have recently done six months course of house-keeping activity. With this, I have two years of experience in one of the famous restaurants in Mumbai, the Taj Hotel. Where my responsibility to manage kitchen staff, take care of vegetables and beverages supplement, and make room arrangements for the customers. Further to this, I am having the skills of native English speakers of the USA so communication would not be a barrier. Currently, I am preparing for an advanced management course so I would be busy during the day time of 10: 00 Am to 4: 00 PM and would be available from 6: 00 PM to 12: AM on the weekdays and free throughout all day for weekends. Please find my CV attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at the interview. Yours Faithfully, Ami
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest in the position of restaurant manager that
was advertised
in the “Times of India” newspaper on 21st, June 2020.

I have completed the hospitality management course at
Nirma
University.
Also
, I have recently done six months course of
house
-keeping activity. With this, I have two years of experience in one of the
famous
restaurants in Mumbai, the
Taj
Hotel. Where my responsibility to manage kitchen staff, take care of vegetables and beverages supplement, and
make
room arrangements for the customers.

Further
to this, I am having the
skills
of native English speakers of the
USA
so
communication would not be a barrier.
Currently
, I am preparing for an advanced management course
so
I would be busy during the day time of 10: 00 Am to 4: 00 PM and would be available from 6: 00 PM to 12: AM on the weekdays and free throughout all day for weekends.

Please
find my CV attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity
further
at the interview.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Ami
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IELTS letter You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter,    explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

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184 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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