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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to apply for the part-time voluntary job at the museum, and was wondering if you take it into account. History is my family’s absolute favorite as my father has been researching on Babylon culture for about thirty years at University of Washington. It is worth to mention that I have been a lifelong fan of historic places and I audited a few history courses in college as well. Moreover, if I want to get an admission in a top tier university, at least one unpaid work experience is needed in my resume. My major in college is business administration and to be more specific it is marketing. Therefore, the public relation of museum could be handled by me if I join your team as I have many reporter friends that can help us to raise our publicity. My college would be ended by the end of July; however, a family trip has already been planned for the beginning of August. Hence, I will be able to start my work at August 10. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ali Fozooni
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for the part-time voluntary job at the museum, and was wondering if you take it into account.

History is my family’s absolute favorite as my father has been researching on Babylon culture for about thirty years at University of Washington. It is worth to mention that I have been a lifelong fan of historic places and I audited a few history courses in college
as well
.
Moreover
, if I want to
get
an admission in a top tier university, at least one unpaid work experience
is needed
in my resume.

My major in college is business administration and to be more specific it is marketing.
Therefore
, the public relation of museum could
be handled
by me if I
join
your team as I have
many
reporter friends that can
help
us to raise our publicity.

My college would
be ended
by the
end
of July;
however
, a family trip has already
been planned
for the beginning of August.
Hence
, I will be able to
start
my work at August 10.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ali
Fozooni
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IELTS letter Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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