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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Kristine, How is everything doing out there. We are actually doing great here in the Philippines. However, a lot of controversies are circulating in the news. Recently, a girl name Kim was found dead in a bath tub at the following morning when she celebrated New Year's eve together with her friends and colleagues. People were saddened from what had happened to her since the victim's family claimed that she was physically abused and raped by her companions on that same day. The government started to thoroughly investigate the individuals involved in the incident due to the fact that they are the primary suspect to the case. I notion that it is essential for the authority to conduct a full assessment to all the persons present in the crime scene and hopefully they can catch who the real culprits are. This instance made me realize that even though you are with the people whom you considered as trustworthy individuals, still I must take care of my self and always be mindful of my personal value because certainly, it is only myself who can protect and shied my life. On the other hand, may also this serve as a moral lesson to all of us and you as well in handling our selves with full guidance. Regards, Jen
Dear Kristine,

How is everything doing out there. We are actually doing great here in the Philippines.
However
,
a lot of
controversies are circulating in the news.

Recently, a girl name Kim
was found
dead in a bath tub at the following morning when she celebrated
New Year's eve
together with her friends and colleagues.
People
were saddened
from what had happened to her since the victim's family claimed that she was
physically
abused and raped by her companions on that same day. The
government
started
to
thoroughly
investigate the individuals involved in the incident due to the fact that they are the primary suspect to the case.
I notion
that it is essential for the authority to conduct a full assessment to all the persons present in the crime scene and
hopefully
they can catch who the real culprits are.

This instance made me realize that
even though
you are with the
people
whom you considered as trustworthy individuals,
still
I
must
take care of my self and always be mindful of my personal value
because
certainly
, it is
only
myself who can protect and shied my life.
On the other hand
, may
also
this serve as a moral lesson to all of us and you
as well
in handling our selves with full guidance.

Regards,

Jen
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IELTS letter You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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