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friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v.1

Dear Jean, I am so glad to hear from you after such a decade of time since we both graduated in University. I'm happy to see your post in facebook that you've visited a lot of beautiful countries with your family. You've mentioned that you are interested to work here in Saudi Arabia and so we can meet each other. I'm so excited to see you soon. Well, actually upon receiving your email, I started to search for a vacant job. Surprisingly, there is a hospital newly opened here in Jeddah where im living hiring for ICU nurse. With number of years of experience I'm sure you are qualified in this job. . . . Here's the website www. kfsh. sa. gov. Don't forget to send your resume as soon as possible. Goodluck! And I'm looking forward to meeting you soon. Warm Wishes, Ayesha
Dear Jean,

I am
so
glad to hear from you after such a decade of time since we both
graduated
in University. I'm happy to
see
your post
in facebook
that you've visited
a lot of
beautiful
countries with your family. You've mentioned that you
are interested
to work here in Saudi
Arabia and
so
we can
meet
each other. I'm
so
excited to
see
you
soon
.

Well, actually upon receiving your email, I
started
to search for a vacant job.
Surprisingly
, there is a hospital
newly
opened here in Jeddah where
im
living hiring for ICU nurse. With number of years of experience I'm sure you
are qualified
in this job.
.
.
.


Here's the website
www
.
kfsh
.
sa
. gov. Don't forget to
send
your resume as
soon
as possible.

Goodluck
! And I'm looking forward to meeting you
soon
.

Warm Wishes,

Ayesha
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IELTS letter friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. v. 1

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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