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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any addrESS

Hello sir, you received my letter in good health and sprit. I would like to introduce myself, i am Muhammad Umar and doing a study in chemical engineering. The main reason to write this letter is that last week i faced a major accident, when was going to attend my university classes in previous week morning at 08: 00 am. At that time someone hit me from backside of my bike. But I don't know what happened with me and in this situation, I was unconscious and not able to help myself. Than you saved me and took me in the hospital. for your struggle and kindness god gave me new life. Consequently I expressed my gratitude with my die heart. You are true human being and i would like to offer you and invited you to visit with his family in my house. I arranged small party to you for your special thank you.
Hello sir,

you received my letter in
good
health and
sprit
. I would like to introduce myself,
i
am Muhammad Umar and doing a study in chemical engineering. The main reason to write this letter is that last week
i
faced a major accident, when was going to attend my university classes in previous week morning at 08: 00 am. At that time someone hit me from backside of my bike.
But
I don't know what happened
with
me and in this situation, I was unconscious and not able to
help
myself.
Than
you saved me and took me in the hospital.
for
your struggle and kindness god gave me new life.
Consequently
I expressed my gratitude with my
die
heart. You are true human being and
i
would like to offer you and invited you to visit with his family in my
house
. I arranged
small
party to you for your special thank you.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any addrESS

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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