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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing to you to bring to your notice that I am interested to be the social events organiser among the participants. Since childhood I had keen interest in the role. This year I got the great opportunity to attend a month training programme. Through this training programme, I can fulfill my wish to become the social events organiser. Hence, I request you to please choose me as a social events organiser. I will assure you that I will do my best to achieve my targets. I am requesting you to kindly provide more and detailed information about my role. Since I am new to this role in UK, I need your support and guidance. In my home country, I have worked as a social events organiser for about two years and I am well versed in it. Therefore, I request you to consider my letter as a request letter and please appoint me as a social events organiser. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Meena.
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to bring to your notice that I
am interested
to be the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
organiser among the participants. Since childhood I had keen interest in the role. This year I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the great opportunity to attend a month training programme. Through this training programme, I can fulfill my wish to become the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
organiser.
Hence
, I request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
choose me as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
organiser. I will assure you that I will do my best to achieve my targets. I am requesting you to kindly provide more and detailed information about my role. Since I am new to this role in UK, I need your support and guidance. In my home country, I have worked as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
organiser for about two years and I am well versed in it.
Therefore
, I request you to consider my letter as a request letter and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
appoint me as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
organiser.

Thanking you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Meena.
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IELTS letter You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . ,

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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