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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in participating in the renovation work at the City Museum Hall.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in participating in the renovation work at the City Museum Hall. As we all know, the city museum is a symbol of the country’s ancient glories and also an integral part of our life. I spent my entire childhood playing in the main garden area of this museum. This is truly an opportunity for me to give back for the betterment of this eminent structure. I am a qualified architect with about 10 years of experience in refurbishing old buildings. I can help the museum refurbishment team in relaying the damaged roof of the museum. Moreover, I can assist in designing a new construction layout for the parking space at the main entrance gate. As I have a full time job, I will be available only on weekends. I hope you would consider my request and give me an opportunity to work for this community cause. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, (Your name)
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest in participating in the renovation work at the City
Museum
Hall. As we all know, the city
museum
is a symbol of the country’s ancient glories and
also
an integral part of our life. I spent my entire childhood playing in the main garden area of this
museum
. This is
truly
an opportunity for me to give back for the betterment of this eminent structure.

I am a qualified architect with about 10 years of experience in refurbishing
old
buildings. I can
help
the
museum
refurbishment team in relaying the damaged roof of the
museum
.
Moreover
, I can assist in designing a new construction layout for the parking space at the main entrance gate. As I have a full time job, I will be available
only
on weekends.

I hope you would consider my request and give me an opportunity to work for this community cause.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
sincerely
,

(Your name)
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IELTS letter Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in participating in the renovation work at the City Museum Hall.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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