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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in working in your museum as a part-time employee. I heard through the grapevine that you are looking for people who can help the museum with some unpaid work. I have always been interested in arts since my childhood. It had been my childhood dream to work for a museum. As I have just completed my graduation in History, I would like to work for the museum so that I can not only enrich my communication skills but also gain valuable work experiences. I am good at handling clients and can also work a museum guide. Apart from this, I am good at doing accounts and this would be definitely an asset to the finance department as they can rely on me at any time of the day. Since I completed my studies only recently, I want to utilize this week to spend time with my loved ones and starting next week I would be available to work. Please note that I will be able to work only work on alternate days as I have the responsibility to look after my parents. I hope you will consider my application and allow me to work for your prestigious museum. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jim Taylor
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in working in your
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people
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in arts since my childhood. It had been my childhood dream to
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work
for a
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museum
. As I have
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just
completed my graduation in History, I would like to
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work
for the
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museum
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so
that I can not
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only
enrich my communication
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skills
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but
also
gain valuable
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work
experiences. I am
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good
at handling clients and can
also
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work
a
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museum
guide. Apart from this, I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at doing accounts and this would be definitely an asset to the finance department as they can rely on me at any time of the day.

Since I completed my studies
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only
recently, I want to utilize this week to spend time with my
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loved
ones and starting
next
week I would be available to
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work
.
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Please
note that I will be able to
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work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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work
on alternate days as I have the responsibility to look after my parents.

I hope you will consider my application and
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allow
me to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for your prestigious museum.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jim Taylor
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

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  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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