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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to support the museum by doing some voluntary work during my leisure time.

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to support the museum by doing some voluntary work during my leisure time. As I am living just on the opposite side of the place, It would be very convenient for me to come and work there. I really love to involve in this type of work because it gives an opportunity to use my skills productively. I am a well-organized person and retired military personnel. Therefore, I can easily help to do any type of work required. Especially, I have a keen knowledge of world war one and two as well. Probably, I can help to organize the museum library. Additionally, any type of labour intensive work is fine with me because I am still extremely fit and I do can handle things delicately. Since I am at home all this time, I will be available anytime you need. Importantly, I can provide my truck for any type of transportation requirement which may incur. I am looking forward to a favourable reply. Yours faithfully, Jack London
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to support the museum by doing
some
voluntary
work
during my leisure time. As I am living
just
on the opposite side of the place, It would be
very
convenient for me to
come
and
work
there. I
really
love
to involve in this
type
of
work
because
it gives an opportunity to
use
my
skills
productively
.

I am a well-organized person and retired military personnel.
Therefore
, I can
easily
help
to do any
type
of
work
required.
Especially
, I have a keen knowledge of world war one and two
as well
.
Probably
, I can
help
to organize the museum library.
Additionally
, any
type
of labour intensive
work
is fine with me
because
I am
still
extremely
fit and I do can handle things
delicately
.

Since I am at home all this time, I will be available anytime you need.
Importantly
, I can provide my truck for any
type
of transportation requirement which may incur.

I am looking forward to a favourable reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jack London
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to support the museum by doing some voluntary work during my leisure time.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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