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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter. describe the work you have been doing. explain why you can no longer do this work. recommend another person who is interested in the work

Dear Mrs. Selina I am writing this letter regretfully to inform you that I could not be able to continue with voluntary teaching work at your charity "Hope for Humanity". I currently teach English to underprivileged children in a local night school which is managed by your charitable organization. Going forward, I would not be able to do so. The reason for this is, I am relocating to New York City next week on a permanent basis. My parents stay there and of late they are not keeping well due to old age. Hence, I have decided to move closer to take good care of them. As a result, I would not be able to continue with my voluntary work. Finally, I would like to recommend one of my colleagues for the teaching activity. Mr. Sam is well known to me and is actively involved in many charitable activities. He has expressed interest to volunteer and I believe he will be an excellent addition to your team. I can not thank enough for all the opportunities provided and sincerely looking forward to working with your esteemed organization in future. Yours sincerely Zebun Nessa
Dear Mrs. Selina

I am writing this letter
regretfully
to inform you that I could not be able to continue with voluntary teaching work at your charity "Hope for Humanity". I
currently
teach English to underprivileged children in a local night school which
is managed
by your charitable organization. Going forward, I would not be able to do
so
.

The reason for this is
, I am relocating to New York City
next
week on a permanent basis. My parents stay there and of late they are not keeping well due to
old
age.
Hence
, I have decided to
move
closer to take
good
care of them.
As a result
, I would not be able to continue with my voluntary work.

Finally
, I would like to recommend one of my colleagues for the teaching activity. Mr. Sam is well known to me and is
actively
involved in
many
charitable activities. He has expressed interest to volunteer and I believe he will be an excellent addition to your team.

I can not thank
enough
for all the opportunities provided and
sincerely
looking forward to working with your esteemed organization in future.

Yours
sincerely


Zebun Nessa
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IELTS letter You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter. describe the work you have been doing. explain why you can no longer do this work. recommend another person who is interested in the work

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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