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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with your requirement for a person willing to work part-time without pay at your museum. I am interested in working at this position and would like to apply for the voluntary work. I have been looking for some voluntary work since past 2 weeks as I have some time-off from my university lectures. Being able to help people without any monetary benefits has always been my interest since childhood. Therefore, I would be more than happy to extent some support towards the museum. Prior to this, I have worked at a library wherein I had managed several tasks single-handedly. During my work tenure, I have attended many visitor queries, on call and in-person, and also provided administration support in various day-to-day activities. I look forward to begin working with the museum to the earliest and would be available to work anytime between 1pm to 6pm Monday-Friday. I hope you consider my request and give me an opportunity to work at the museum. I will look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Kriti Khanna
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with your requirement for a person willing to
work
part-time without pay at your museum. I
am interested
in working at this position and would like to apply for the voluntary work.

I have been looking for
some
voluntary
work
since past 2 weeks as I have
some
time-off from my university lectures. Being able to
help
people
without any monetary benefits has always been my interest since childhood.
Therefore
, I would be more than happy to extent
some
support towards the museum.

Prior to this, I have worked at a library wherein I had managed several tasks single-
handedly
. During my
work
tenure, I have attended
many
visitor queries, on call and in-person, and
also
provided administration support in various day-to-day activities.

I look forward to
begin
working with the museum to the earliest and would be available to
work
anytime between 1pm to 6pm Monday-Friday. I hope you consider my request and give me an opportunity to
work
at the museum.

I will look forward to hear from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kriti Khanna
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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