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You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions

You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions XEmP8

Dear GOD. I hope you are will. I am writing this letter to request you to look after my house for seven days. Ask I go to the marriage to Hyderabad. You already informed me that you be home next week and that is you I am asking fave. If you could Chuck my home time to time it will be grate of you. The plan at the living room need to be water one a week and place it near window for sunlight and also I gave you number to the carpenters the door or were lose how will renter for my sit please kindly open the door for him. If there is any problem please don’t call me I have gave you number to me friend he will be there if there I any problem. Thank you for all you help. I remember bring back that you ask to bring icon. You truly, Jose

Dear GOD.

I hope you are will. I am writing this letter to request you to look after my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 for seven days. Ask I go to the marriage to Hyderabad.

You already informed me that you be home next
 week and that is
 you I am asking fave. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you could Chuck my home time to time it will be Consider using a past participle here: "grated".grated
grate
 of you.

The plan This is a collocation error. Use "in" for rooms. Revise: "in the living".in the living
at the living
 room need to be water one a week and place it near window for sunlight and also
 I gave you number to the carpenters the door or Did you mean "where" or "we"?wherewe
were
Consider using a past participle here: "lost".lost
lose
 how will renter for my sit This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 kindly open the door for him.

If there is any problem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 don’t call me I have Did you mean "give"?give
gave
 you number to me friend he will be there if Please check whether a verb is missing here or whether 'there' should be 'their'.their I
there I
 any problem.

Thank you for all you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. I remember bring back that you ask to bring icon.

You truly
,

Jose

IELTS letter You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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