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You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions

You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions XEmP8
Dear GOD. I hope you are will. I am writing this letter to request you to look after my house for seven days. Ask I go to the marriage to Hyderabad. You already informed me that you be home next week and that is you I am asking fave. If you could Chuck my home time to time it will be grate of you. The plan at the living room need to be water one a week and place it near window for sunlight and also I gave you number to the carpenters the door or were lose how will renter for my sit please kindly open the door for him. If there is any problem please don’t call me I have gave you number to me friend he will be there if there I any problem. Thank you for all you help. I remember bring back that you ask to bring icon. You truly, Jose
Dear GOD.

I hope you are will. I am writing this letter to request you to look after my
house
for seven days. Ask I go to the marriage to Hyderabad.

You already informed me that you be home
next
week and
that is
you I am asking fave.
If
you could Chuck my home time to time it will be
grate
of you.

The plan
at the living
room need to be water one a week and place it near window for sunlight and
also
I gave you number to the carpenters the door or
were
lose
how will renter for my sit
please
kindly open the door for him.

If there is any problem
please
don’t call me I have
gave
you number to me friend he will be there if
there I
any problem.

Thank you for all you
help
. I remember bring back that you ask to bring icon.

You
truly
,

Jose
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IELTS letter You are going away for home for one week and you need to ask you neighbour to look after you home? Why you want to go away? What you want you neighbors to look after? If there any problems then give the instructions

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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