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Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration. In your letter include An invitation for your friend What the celebration is about Travel and accommodation suggestions

Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration. In your letter include An invitation for your friend What the celebration is about Travel and accommodation suggestions NMePj

Dear James, How're you doing today? I hope you and your family are hale and hearty. I know you're the busy type so I want to inform you in advance that I'll be organizing a party on the 22nd of August and you're specially invited. I'm organizing the party for my 33rd birthday anniversary, and as you already know, I've not been able to celebrate my birthday for the past 10 years because of the nature of my work, hence why I'm considering this year's event very special. Regarding the travel and accommodation, for convenience sake, I'll send a taxi to pick you up from Enugu down to Umuahia on the eve of the program, I'd equally make a hotel reservation for you if you're don't feel like staying in my house. I hope you'll create time from your strenuous schedule and honour my invitation. I'm looking for to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Jay.

Dear James,

How're you doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
? I hope you and your family are hale and hearty. I know you're the busy type This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I want to inform you in advance that I'll be organizing a party on the 22nd of August and you're specially
 invited.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm organizing the party for my 33rd birthday anniversary, and as you already know, I've not been able to celebrate my birthday for the past 10 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the nature of my work, hence
 why I'm considering this year's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 special.

Regarding the travel and accommodation, Did you mean "for convenience’s sake" or "for convenience’ sake"?for convenience’s sakefor convenience’ sake
for convenience sake
, I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a taxi to pick you up from Possible spelling mistake found.EnoughTeluguSnugSnugsENGENSG
Enugu
 down to Possible spelling mistake found.MariaOmahaMafiaBahiaManiaAmalia
Umuahia
 on the eve of the program, I'd equally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a hotel reservation for you if you're don't feel like staying in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

I hope you'll create time from your strenuous schedule and Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.honor
honour
 my invitation. I'm looking for to seeing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

Jay. 