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You are going abroad to attend language course asking advice

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Dear Tom I am writting to a letter to ask some advice. Next month I am going to abroad to learn language. You are living a city which I am going. I want to know about language cuorse. Their price and length. IThink l have opportunity to study only six month course. I want to know about accomodation. I go there only myself. l would like to stay in dormitory. I think l have much chancè to learn english fluently. I need skillful trainer I am interested in boxing. When l have free time. I will go in for boxing. I hope you will read my letter. l would be greatful from you if you help me to study abroad.
Dear Tom I am
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writting
to a letter to ask
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some
advice.
Next
month I am
There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "going abroad"?
going to abroad
to learn language. You are living a city which I am going. I want to know about language
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cuorse
. Their price and length.
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IThink
l have opportunity to study
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only
six month course. I want to know about
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accomodation
. I go there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
myself.
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l
would like to stay in dormitory. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
l have much
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chancè
to learn
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english
fluently
. I need skillful trainer I
am interested
in boxing. When l have free time. I will go in for boxing. I hope you will read my letter.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
l
would be
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greatful
from you if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to study abroad.
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IELTS letter You are going abroad to attend language course asking advice

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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