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bank sccount overdrawn dollar

bank sccount overdrawn dollar 8LYOV
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in the reply of a letter which I received a letter from your bank. In the letter you state that I am overdrawn 240 dollar and you are charging 70 dollar from my account I would like to point out the reason. I am overdrawn totally because of your bank mistake. If you check your record you will get a letter in which I mention you to stop paying car instalments from my bank account. I bought a car over a year ago and that instalments are going from my account. In the last month I sold that car to a company. But due to your negligence today I am overdrawn. Now I would like you to contact to garage where I bought a car explaining your error. I would also like you to ask them to return the money. Yours faithfully, Adeela Mahmood
Dear Sir,

I am writing this
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in the reply of a
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which I received a
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from your bank. In the
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you state that I am overdrawn 240
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dollar
and you are charging 70
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dollar
from my
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account


I would like to point out the reason. I am overdrawn
totally
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of your bank mistake.
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If
you
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check
your record you will
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get
a
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in which I mention you to
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stop
paying
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car
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instalments
from my bank account. I
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bought
a
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car
over a year ago and that
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instalments
are going from my account. In the last month I sold that
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car
to a
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company
.
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But
due to your negligence
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today
I am overdrawn.

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Now
I would like you to contact to garage where I
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bought
a
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car
explaining your error. I would
also
like you to ask them to return the money.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Adeela
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Mahmood
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IELTS letter bank sccount overdrawn dollar

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  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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