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asking reference from boss

asking reference from boss EdXqL

Dear Mr. BrownI am writing inform you about that I am applying for a newjob and I need referencefrom you. I already filled in documents for it. This job realted with council, so I thought carefully about it. And figure out that it is a good chance to btush up, by giving variety of opportunities I couldn't rufuse. If you enquire me why it is unport. In my opinion I found a job which It can come on me and can influence to my laziness life. Majority of people want to find with a high salary I am no exception too. It is a main reason why I want this job. If you don't mind can praise me in my reference. And if it impossible could you remind my goals suchas involved in great projects. I would appreciate your immediate attention to my reference. I would deeply glad if you find a time and reply to my letter. Sincerly

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 with council, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 want to find with a high salary I am no exception too. It is a main reason why I want this job. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 you don't mind can praise me in my reference. And if It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.it isit was
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 could you remind my goals Possible spelling mistake found.such as
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 involved in great projects. I would appreciate your immediate attention to my reference. I would deeply
 glad if you find a time and reply to my letter. Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerly