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I hope you and your family are well.

I hope you and your family are well. OyLy7

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith, I hope you and your family are well. I reached home after a safe journey. Today, When I saw my luggage then I did not find my small leather bag in it. I realised that I had left this in my room. As you know, We bought it from the mall when we went to Sydney. I do not really need this bag. But some of my essential things are in it. There is a photo album, wristwatch and wallet. These things are not valuable in terms of money but these have a lot of sentimental values. None of the other things are important. Could you please send me these things by either airmail or ordinary mail? and let me know how much cost of this mail and send your account details. So I will transfer the cost of money to your account. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Malkeet Singh

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,

I hope you and your family are well. I reached home after a safe journey. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my luggage then I did not find my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 leather bag in it. I Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.realized
realised
 that I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 this in my room. As you know, We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it from the mall when we went to Sydney.

I do not really
 need this bag. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my essential things are in it. There is a photo album, wristwatch and wallet. These things are not valuable in terms of money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 these have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 sentimental values. None of the other things are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
.

Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me these things by either airmail or ordinary mail? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know how much cost of this mail and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 your account This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I will transfer the cost of money to your account.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.MarketMallet
Malkeet
 Singh