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Interesting person I have met

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Hi guys, today I would like to talk about an interested person I have met. So, i know all of us had a wonderful memories with our friends in secondary school and me too. I am so lucky when i have a oppoternity can study in class 9a2. I can show you a video of my class. But the person I fond of is this girl Her full name is Đỗ Nguyễn Quỳnh Hương. We always called her Đậu, that her nick name. she was born in 25 of may. Đậu has short curly hair ( đầu moi) with a cute face and big eyes, big nose with shine smile. Her skin is really soft i always wanna touch it. Beside Đậu quiet tall about 165cm and she has a lot of hand feathers. So we always trit her like a chimpanzee. My friend is very nice, helpful and funny. When i go with her i feel relax by her funny stories. She also good at English and chemical. We have same favorite and we can share it together comfortablely. Nowadays because of the corona virus we can’t meet but we always chat together and talk about anything all the world. I very miss her and my friends, i also wanna go to school and meet u guys. So i hope corona virus can destroy.
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lucky when
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the person I fond of is this girl

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Đỗ
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Nguyễn
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. We always called her
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has short curly hair
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đầu
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moi
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eyes,
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nose with shine smile. Her skin is
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soft i always
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touch it. Beside
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quiet tall about
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165cm and
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hand feathers.
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we always
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her like a chimpanzee. My friend is
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nice, helpful and
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funny
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feel relax by her
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funny
stories.
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also
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at English and chemical. We have same
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favorite and
we can share it together
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. Nowadays
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of the
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corona virus
we can’t
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meet
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we always chat together and talk about anything all the world. I
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miss her and my friends, i
also
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wanna
go to school and
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hope
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IELTS letter Interesting person I have met

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
225 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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