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you are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay i your home while you are away.

you are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay i your home while you are away. BwrBV

Dear Ana, Thank you for agreeing to be my home sitter, am really excited about my holiday to California I really appreciate for you are making my holiday stress free. I have been thinking where to hide the keys, at last I have decided to put in backyard garage room, you can get it once you enter the house make around to the left you can find the garage room. There you can find the keys wrapped in a blue coloured shopper, kept in empty pot. May I ask you to do 3 things for me? Make sure you water my orchid plants twice a day as the soil needs to be moist all the time, and you receive the letter of mine covid vaccine certificate which will be delivered tomorrow. last but not least feed the cat twice a day and make it bath once. I will be coming back on 5th of May time 9: 30pm As you know after arriving, I need to go for covid 19 medical test and after getting the report only am allowed to leave the airport. Until I reach it will late night don’t keep up for me enjoy your dinner and have a sleep, not to worry about keys I have pair with me too will meet you in morning. Thank you Your loving, Hope

Dear Ana,

Thank you for agreeing to be my home sitter, am really
 excited about my holiday to California I really
 appreciate for you are making my holiday This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 free.

I have been thinking where to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :covermask
hide
 the keys, at last I have decided to put in backyard garage room, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it once you enter the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 around to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 you can find the garage room.

There you can find the keys wrapped in a blue Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 shopper, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in empty pot.

May I ask you to do 3 things for me? This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
Make
 sure you water my orchid plants twice a day as the soil needs to be moist all the time, and you receive the letter of mine Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
 vaccine certificate which will be delivered
 tomorrow. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLast
last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".the least
least
 feed the cat twice a day and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it bath once.

I will be coming back on 5th of May time 9: 30pm As you know after arriving, I need to go for Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid 19
 medical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 and after getting the report This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the airport. Until I reach it The word 'night' is a noun or an adjective. A verb is missing or misspelled, or maybe a comma is missing.
will late night
 don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 up for me enjoy your dinner and have a sleep, not to worry about keys I have pair with me too will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you in morning.

Thank you

Your loving,

Hope