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Stay at home while abroard

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Dear Ana, Thank you again for agreeing to be my house sitter. I am so excited about my holiday in California and really appreciate that you are making it stress-free by staying at my place in the meantime. I’ve been thinking about where to hide the keys and decided that the garden shed was the best place. If you go around the house, you will see it on the left. The door will be unlocked and you’ll find a spare set of keys wrapped in a plastic bag inside an empty flower pot. May I ask you to do two little things for me? Could you please water my orchids twice a week to keep the soil slightly moist? Also, I’m expecting a letter with details of my Covid vaccination appointment. Would you mind opening any correspondence from the health service and sending me a picture of the letter when it arrives? I’m coming back on Friday, 16th July. The plane lands at 8. 45 pm. I will take an Uber from the airport and will probably arrive around 11 pm. In any case, don’t wait up for me as I can let myself in with my set of keys. Please feel at home and enjoy your time in London. I look forward to seeing you when I’m back. Warm regards, Asiya
Dear Ana,

Thank you again for agreeing to be my
house
sitter. I am
so
excited about my holiday in California and
really
appreciate that you are making it
stress
-free by staying at my place in the meantime.

I’ve been thinking about where to
hide
the keys and decided that the garden shed was the best place. If you go around the
house
, you will
see
it on the
left
. The door will
be unlocked
and you’ll find a spare set of keys wrapped in a plastic bag inside an empty flower pot. May I ask you to do two
little
things for me? Could you
please
water my orchids twice a week to
keep
the soil
slightly
moist?
Also
, I’m expecting a letter with
details
of my
Covid
vaccination appointment. Would you mind

opening any correspondence from the health service and sending me a picture of the letter when it arrives?

I’m coming back on Friday, 16th July. The
plane
lands at 8. 45 pm. I will take an Uber from the airport and will
probably
arrive around 11 pm. In any case, don’t wait up for me as I can
let
myself in with my set of keys.
Please
feel at home and enjoy your time in London. I look forward to seeing you when I’m back.

Warm regards,

Asiya
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IELTS letter Stay at home while abroard

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