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You just received a letter from your friend, in a part of this she wrote “I’m very happy to move to a new house. It’s quite small butt I like it very much. I would like you to visit me someday.

You just received a letter from your friend, in a part of this she wrote “I’m very happy to move to a new house. It’s quite small butt I like it very much. I would like you to visit me someday. bx1YY

Dear Han, How are you? It is a long time since the last time we met. I’m glad to hear that you have to move to a new house. Congratulations. Actually, I really want to visit your new house, but in a next few months, I have quite busy for my new job, with a lot of works that I have to complete. I think I can’t get to explore your new house at all. But I have a gift that I want to send for you. As I know, you are a homemade baker for many kinds of bread, cake, cookies, … I want to give you a stand-mixer to make your cooking easier. And it is a Pink hue, hope you love it. At the first time I saw it, I think it is appropriate for you and that is the reason why I decided to buy it. But I’m so sad that I can bring it to your house now. Hope to see you soon, I will get there as soon as possible. Yours friends, An

Dear Han,

How are you? It is a long time since the last time we met. I’m glad to hear that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. Congratulations.

Actually, I really
 want to visit your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in a next
 few months, I have quite busy for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 job, with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 works that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 complete. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I can’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to explore your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 at all. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I have a gift that I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 for you.

As I know, you are a homemade baker for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 kinds of bread, cake, cookies, … I want to give you a stand-mixer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your cooking easier. And it is a Pink hue, hope you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it.

At the first
 time I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 it, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is appropriate for you and that is
 the reason why I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I’m This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sad that I can bring it to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 there as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours friends, An