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You are making a plan for a summer vacation. You are interested in several tour options you found online while browsing. Write an email to a travel agency in about 150-200 words.

You are making a plan for a summer vacation. You are interested in several tour options you found online while browsing. Write an email to a travel agency in about 150-200 words. 2RYrb

Dear Manager, I am writing to enquire about a summer trip package in Goa. Recently, On the internet, I ran into your flash advertisement for four day and three nights trip to Goa, India. I saw the exotic pictures of Goa and have decided to visit there. Mainly, Goa is famous for its beaches and water sports, and we are looking for the same, let me know what all rides are included in the package. We would also like to explore the nightlife in Goa as the casinos and clubs there are as enchanting as its beaches. As far as the bookings are concerned, I would be glad if you send me an estimated quotation for the tour. Moreover, I would love, if you put some light on group discount as we are a group of five students. If our thoughts align and we fix the deal, I would like to have an advance booking. Let me know the mode of payment so we can handover you a token amount and book our dates. Our tentative arrival date would be the 25th of June 2021, which is flexible. Waiting for your reply. Yours Truly, Bob Smith

Dear Manager,

I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about a summer trip package in Goa. Recently, On the internet, I ran into your flash advertisement for four day and three nights trip to Goa, India. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the exotic pictures of Goa and have decided to visit there.

Mainly
, Goa is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for its beaches and water sports, and we are looking for the same, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know what all rides are included
 in the package. We would also
 like to explore the nightlife in Goa as the casinos and clubs there are as enchanting as its beaches.

As far as the bookings are concerned
, I would be glad if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me an estimated quotation for the tour. Moreover
, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, if you put This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 light on group discount as we are a group of five students. If our thoughts Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).align, and
align and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the deal, I would like to have an advance booking.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know the mode of payment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can The word 'handover' is a noun. Did you mean the verb "hand over"?hand over
handover
 you a token amount and book our dates. Our tentative arrival date would be the 25th of June 2021, which is flexible. Waiting for your reply.

Yours Truly
,

Bob Smith