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You are football player , write a letter to your team mate to take leave for some time to pactise game

You are football player, write a letter to your team mate to take leave for some time to pactise game WnoLN
Dear Chandra, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this to inform you to take break for some time for myself to play the football. As you know that I am studying final year Engineering, I have to score more in my final exams so that I can get job easily in campus recruitment. The exams will be conducted in the next month, I need serious preparation and have to spent most of the time in city Library to read various books. You are aware that I am very key player in our Team moreover we performed very well in earlier tournament. Due to aforementioned reason, I will not be coming for two months to practice the game, I miss you all for these days and manage to practise the football regularly to compete the other city teams. We will meet after finishing my exams and celebrate party with all team mates to rejuvenate ourselves. Yours Lovingly, Mohan
Dear Chandra,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this to inform you to take break for
some
time for myself to play the football.

As you know that I am studying final year Engineering, I
have to
score more in my final exams
so
that I can
get
job
easily
in campus recruitment. The exams will
be conducted
in the
next
month, I need serious preparation and
have to
spent most of the time in city Library to read various books. You are aware that I am
very
key player in our Team
moreover
we performed
very
well in earlier tournament.

Due to aforementioned reason, I will not be coming for two months to practice the game, I miss you all for these days and manage to
practise
the football
regularly
to compete the other city teams. We will
meet
after finishing my exams and celebrate party with all
team mates
to rejuvenate ourselves.

Yours
Lovingly
,

Mohan
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IELTS letter You are football player, write a letter to your team mate to take leave for some time to pactise game

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  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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