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Complaint to manager of school

Complaint to manager of school Lbo08
Dear manager I am very dissatisfied with the current situation and the program that you have designed for us because this kind of planning puts a lot of pressure on students and we expect you to understand us as school principals. The fact that teachers send tens and maybe more videos for each lesson makes us tired of studying. Also, the type of teaching does not allow us to ask our own questions while teaching It would be great if you could provide the conditions for teachers to teach us in class time Another issue that is extremely annoying us is that teachers think that in our free time we have nothing to do except studying but actually we have so many work to do and besides, we need time to relax and have fun because if we are always studying, we will get tired very soon and we will not be interested in studying anymore. But unfortunately, regardless of these issues, you force us to always study because we have exams every day. even lessons that are not important and will not have an impact on our future have high expectations of us. I and all students expect the focus to be on the quality of teaching, not on exams and I'm sure this method is better for all of us and will have better results. So I will be happy to solve this problem as soon as possible Yours sincerely, Negar mohammadi
Dear manager

I am
very
dissatisfied with the
current
situation and the program that you have designed for us
because
this kind of planning puts
a lot of
pressure on
students and
we
expect
you to understand us as school principals.

The fact that teachers
send
tens and maybe more videos for each lesson
makes
us tired of
studying
.
Also
, the type of teaching does not
allow
us to ask our
own
questions while teaching

It would be great if you could provide the conditions for teachers to teach us in
class
time

Another issue
that is
extremely
annoying us is that teachers
think
that in our free time we have nothing to do except
studying
but
actually we have
so
many work
to do and
besides
, we need time to relax and have fun
because
if we are always
studying
, we will
get
tired
very
soon and
we will not
be interested
in
studying
anymore.

But
unfortunately, regardless of these issues, you force us to always study
because
we have exams every day.
even
lessons that are not
important
and will not have an impact on our future have high expectations of us.

I and all students
expect
the focus to be on the quality of teaching, not on exams and I'm sure this method is better for all of us and will have better results.
So
I will be happy to solve this problem as
soon
as
possible


Yours
sincerely
,

Negar
mohammadi
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IELTS letter Complaint to manager of school

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
243 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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