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Complaint to manager of school

Complaint to manager of school Lbo08

Dear manager I am very dissatisfied with the current situation and the program that you have designed for us because this kind of planning puts a lot of pressure on students and we expect you to understand us as school principals. The fact that teachers send tens and maybe more videos for each lesson makes us tired of studying. Also, the type of teaching does not allow us to ask our own questions while teaching It would be great if you could provide the conditions for teachers to teach us in class time Another issue that is extremely annoying us is that teachers think that in our free time we have nothing to do except studying but actually we have so many work to do and besides, we need time to relax and have fun because if we are always studying, we will get tired very soon and we will not be interested in studying anymore. But unfortunately, regardless of these issues, you force us to always study because we have exams every day. even lessons that are not important and will not have an impact on our future have high expectations of us. I and all students expect the focus to be on the quality of teaching, not on exams and I'm sure this method is better for all of us and will have better results. So I will be happy to solve this problem as soon as possible Yours sincerely, Negar mohammadi

Dear manager

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Yours sincerely
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Possible spelling mistake found.NearNe garNagar
Negar
Possible spelling mistake found.Mohammad
mohammadi