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Hello everyone! My name is Muhammad Hanif Abkari. You can call me Hanif. I'm 18 years old and currently, I'm a student in the Business Administration program at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia. I'm the eldest of 2 siblings. I was born in Bandung, Indonesia. Here's a little thing about my hometown. Bandung is such a really beautiful place. It took a 2-3 hours drive from Jakarta the capital of Indonesia.

Hello everyone! My name is Muhammad Hanif Abkari. You can call me Hanif. I'm 18 years old and currently, I'm a student in the Business Administration program at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia. I'm the eldest of 2 siblings. I was born in Bandung, Indonesia. Here's a little thing about my hometown. Bandung is such a really beautiful place. It took a 2-3 hours drive from Jakarta the capital of Indonesia. ORPLp
Hello everyone! My name is Muhammad Hanif Abkari. You can call me Hanif. I'm 18 years old and currently, I'm a student in the Business Administration program at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia. I'm the eldest of 2 siblings. I was born in Bandung, Indonesia. Here's a little thing about my hometown. Bandung is such a really beautiful place. It took a 2-3 hours drive from Jakarta the capital of Indonesia.
Hello everyone! My name is Muhammad
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Hanif
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Hanif
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thing about my hometown. Bandung is such a
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place. It took a 2-3 hours drive from Jakarta the capital of Indonesia.
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IELTS letter Hello everyone! My name is Muhammad Hanif Abkari. You can call me Hanif. I'm 18 years old and currently, I'm a student in the Business Administration program at Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia. I'm the eldest of 2 siblings. I was born in Bandung, Indonesia. Here's a little thing about my hometown. Bandung is such a really beautiful place. It took a 2-3 hours drive from Jakarta the capital of Indonesia.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
69 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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