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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent. jXpM
Dear john, I am writting this letter with regards the house rent of 6b, Clark avenue, pirimai. Sir at the movement i am facing financial problems, as you know recently i change my job and i just join new job two days ago. Due to changing the job i spent my all money on my grociery and biils, so now i do not have enough money to pay the rent of this week on time. I will be glad if you give me time and allow me to pay this weak rent with next weak rent. I am insure you this will be happen last time. Finally if you are agree then i will pay you both rent in 8th of this months. Thanks i look forword to hear from you.
Dear john,

I am
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writting
this letter with regards the
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house
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rent
of 6b, Clark avenue,
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pirimai
. Sir at the movement
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i
am facing financial problems, as you know recently
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i
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change
my job

and
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i
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just
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join
new job two days ago. Due to changing the job
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i
spent my all money on my
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grociery
and
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biils
,
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so
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now
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i
do not have
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enough
money to pay the
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rent
of this week on time.

I will be glad if you give me time and
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allow
me to pay this weak
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rent
with
next
weak
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rent
. I am insure you this will be
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happen
last time.
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Finally
if you are
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agree
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then


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i
will pay you both
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rent
in 8th of
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this months
.

Thanks
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i
look
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forword
to hear from you.
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IELTS letter You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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