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Hello John, I am penning down this letter in the concern of the camera which I have recently bought from your Ludhiana store. I bought this product from your local shop worth $4000 but I received this I was very excited because I got it on the exact time when i need it. Moreover, my happiness turned into sadness when I opened its backing and found few of its essential parts were missing. Hence, this thing made me very upset and I was feeling ashamed in front of my partner as he was also very frightened to use it as soon as possible. As I purchased a digital gadget for my husband on his birthday. I would like you give him a surprise as he tremendously fond of the electronic items. But now he won't be able to use it because of its missing parts. At the end I could only request to you, please replace this or give me refund if possible because the event I purchased it has gone. Hope to hear you soon. Yours sincerelyRihan

Hello John, I am penning down this letter in the concern of the camera which I have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your Ludhiana store. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this product from your local shop worth $4000 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I received this I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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got
 it on the exact time when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 need it. Moreover
, my happiness turned into sadness when I opened its backing and found few of its essential parts were missing. Hence
, this thing made me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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upset and
 I was feeling ashamed in front of my partner as he was also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 frightened to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a digital gadget for my husband on his birthday. I would like you give him a surprise as It seems that a verb is missing.he ishe was
he
tremendously
 fond of the electronic items. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he won't be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its missing parts. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 request to you, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 replace this or give me refund if possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
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purchased
 it has gone. Hope to hear you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsincerelyRihan.sincerelyRihan!sincerelyRihan?sincerelyRihan:sincerelyRihan,sincerelyRihan;
sincerelyRihan