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For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter State what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this Give details on how you have benefited from the club Explain why you want to leave.

For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter State what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this Give details on how you have benefited from the club Explain why you want to leave. x6do
Dear Mr. Mathew, Hope this letter finds you well. I am John Smith and I’m writing this letter to withdraw my membership from your club and cannot continue for the upcoming year. I am premium member of the club “Youngster” since last five years and soon it will be the sixth year at the end of this month. I paid the charges for membership through online using net banking directly to the club account on the date of 25th November 2020. The club provided me numerous benefits. To begin with, when I joined, I was shy and bitter conservative. But thanks to the club members now I’m extrovert and able to communicate with any person. In addition to this, I have developed my skill of playing tennis. The club tennis court will always be makes me smile on my face whenever I’ll think of it. There are lot many memories which unable to forget. However, I cannot continue to the club for the next period. As I’m shifting now to another city due to my work, I have been promoted as a general manager and thus I need to relocate to head office which is located in another city. Although, whenever, I’ll be back I’m sure I’ll join again. Thanks for the great time and it is sad moment to leave but I don’t have any other option. Yours truly, John Smith.
Dear Mr. Mathew,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am John Smith and I’m writing this letter to withdraw my membership from your
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club
and cannot continue for the upcoming year.

I
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am premium
member of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
“Youngster” since last five years and
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soon
it will be the sixth year at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of this month.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
paid the charges for membership through online using net banking
directly
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
account on the date of 25th November 2020. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
provided me numerous benefits. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
, I was shy and bitter conservative.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
thanks to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
members
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
I’m extrovert and able to communicate with any person.
In addition
to this, I have developed my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
of playing tennis. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
tennis court will always be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me smile on my face whenever I’ll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of it. There are lot
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
memories which unable to forget.

However
, I cannot continue to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
for the
next
period. As I’m shifting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
to another city due to my work, I have
been promoted
as a general manager and
thus
I need to relocate to head office which
is located
in another city. Although, whenever, I’ll be back I’m sure I’ll
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
again.

Thanks for the great time and it is sad moment to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I don’t have any other option.

Yours
truly
,

John Smith.

IELTS letter For the past year, you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary. In your letter State what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this Give details on how you have benefited from the club Explain why you want to leave.

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