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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent. Xmpr
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to request you that I will be paying the rent late this month, because I am facing avalanche of financial troubles. Let me explain my situation, I'm flat broke as my company got shifted to vizag and the organization is in the losses, for the reason which they are unable to provide wages this month and I lost the job too and I am down in the dumps, however I got a new job yesterday and my remuneration is also high. I am in cloud nine. The next month salary will be credited in advance but late this month. As I am a tenant of your apartment from past 8years, you know I am that guy who work oneself to the bone. I never failed to pay rent on time every month. Moreover, I requested my company HR to credit salary in advance and they accepted, so I will kindly transfer the rent after 20th of this month. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Raj.
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to request you that I will be paying the rent late this
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because
I am facing avalanche of financial troubles.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation, I'm flat broke as my
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company
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got
shifted to
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vizag
and the organization is in the losses, for the reason which they are unable to provide wages this
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month
and I lost the job
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too and
I am down in the dumps,
however
I
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got
a new job yesterday and my remuneration is
also
high. I am in cloud nine. The
next
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month
salary will
be credited
in advance
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but
late this month.

As I am a tenant of your apartment from past 8years, you know I am that guy who work oneself to the bone. I never failed to pay rent on time every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
.
Moreover
, I requested my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
HR to credit salary in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
advance and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I will kindly transfer the rent after 20th of this month.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Raj.

IELTS letter You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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