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Replacement of electrical device

Replacement of electrical device Nepj
Dear sir, I have purchased an iron box from your company one week back. It was worked in good condition for one week. But from yesterday it is not working properly. As I communicated with customer services many times but they are are not giving positive response from there end. Its almost 25 days I raised this issue through mail to customer complaint mail id. I did not get any reply from there end also. This is very essential device in our daily life. So finally I am requesting you to please reply this product with new piece as soon as possible.
Dear sir, I have
purchased
an iron box from your
company
one week back. It
was worked
in
good
condition for one week.
But
from yesterday it is not working
properly
. As I communicated with customer services
many
times
but
they
are are
not giving
positive
response from
there
end
. Its almost 25 days I raised this issue through mail to customer complaint mail id. I did not
get
any reply from there
end
also
. This is
very
essential device in our daily life.
So
finally
I am requesting you to
please
reply this product with new piece as
soon
as possible.
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IELTS letter Replacement of electrical device

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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