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A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvatages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.

A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvatages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend. 6BO0
Hi Kiran, Hopping you are good, LAst night I had gone through your mail about your camping holiday, it is nice to know that finally, you are interested for outdoor trips as you are a family person. I would like to give some suggestions for your trip. Summer holiday camping always has some fun as you will be visiting some tourist places like Simla, Himalayas, etc. . The majority of humans like to stay with nature as it gives mental relief, peace of mind, etc. I knew about your work pressure in routine life. I personally recommend you to visit such places for getting some relief from your professional life. Same time I am advising you to be more cautious about the current situation as the entire globe is facing a difficult time due to COVID. Always carry a medical kit with you. Avoid taking rod side foods, if possible carry a mini gas stove which will cope for a week. Coming to me it is hard to say that this summer I have a project deadline, and I had utilized all my leaves as well. so I may not be joining you on the trip. Please convey my greetings to aunty. I wish you have a safe trip. I am always available on phone for any support during your trip. Yours friendly, Anil Kumar
Hi Kiran,

Hopping you are
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,
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LAst
night I had gone through your mail about your camping holiday, it is nice to know that
finally
, you are
The usual collocation for "interested" is "in" not "for". Did you mean "interested in"?
interested for
outdoor trips as you are a family person. I would like to give
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some
suggestions for your trip.

Summer holiday camping always has
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some
fun as you will be visiting
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some
tourist places like
Possible spelling mistake found.
Simla
, Himalayas, etc.
Two consecutive dots
.
The majority of humans like to stay with nature as it gives mental relief, peace of mind, etc. I knew about your work pressure in routine life. I
personally
recommend you to visit such places for getting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
relief from your professional life. Same time I am advising you to be more cautious about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation as the entire globe is facing a difficult time due to
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID
. Always carry a medical kit with you. Avoid taking rod side foods, if possible carry a mini gas stove which will cope for a week. Coming to me it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to say that this summer I have a project deadline, and I had utilized all my
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leaves
as well
.
Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
so
I may not be joining you on the trip.
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Please
convey my greetings to aunty. I wish you have a safe trip. I am always available on phone for any support

during your trip.

Yours friendly,

Anil Kumar
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IELTS letter A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. describe some possible disadvatages. say whether you would like to go camping with your friend.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
224 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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