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Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you could not attend and forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: - Apologize for missing the birthda y celebration - Explain why you missed it and why you had not let her know - Describe how you will make it up to her

Last weekend, your cousin celebrated her 50th birthday, but you could not attend and forgot to cancel. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter: - Apologize for missing the birthda y celebration - Explain why you missed it and why you had not let her know - Describe how you will make it up to her K6gR

Hi Vinni, Belated birthday wishes on your 50th birthday. I hope you had a great party and had a wonderful time with your family and friends. I wish I would have been there. I am really sorry that I could not attend it. I hope you will forgive me for missing it. At least, I would have informed you in advance to cancel it. At the last moment, my colleague got sick and I need to travel on behalf of him to a business conference. Everything happened so sudden that I could not inform you. My busy schedule can not be an excuse to miss the special day. So, I would like to invite you for a dinner this Saturday at a new Sushi restaurant, which recently opened in our neighbourhood. I hope you will forgive me and accept my invitation and we can cherish old memories. Your Cousin, Al

Hi Possible spelling mistake found.JinniVinci
Vinni
,

Belated birthday wishes on your 50th birthday. I hope you had a great party and had a wonderful time with your family and friends. I wish I would have been there.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am really
 sorry that I could not attend it. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will forgive me for missing it. At least, I would have informed you in advance to cancel it.

At the last moment, my colleague This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 sick and I need to travel on behalf of him to a business conference. Everything happened This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sudden that I could not inform you.

My busy schedule can not be an excuse to miss the special day. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would like to invite you for a dinner this Saturday at a new Sushi restaurant, which recently opened in our Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
.

I hope you will forgive me and accept my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).invitation, and
invitation and
 we can cherish This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 memories.

Your Cousin,

Al