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You are experiencing financial problem write a letter to your landlord

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Dear Mr Brown, This is to inform you that, I am Mr Josh Cardinal who is renting one of your flat in Great britain eastern colony. My reason of writing this letter is that, recently due to to this pandamic situation i will not be able to pay the rent. However, as you know that i am your loyal customer and always pay you the rent before hand. I am affraid that this time it would not be the same. In addition to this, as you know that i am a business man and selfemployed, my whole business work on credit basis. Furthermore, due to this epidemic all the funds which was about to come has been delayed by my customers. However, i am about to receive my business insurance by the first week of next month which is in August 2021. Although i even have my Fix deposits that is about to released by the end of this month. I further assure you that, i will definately pay both months rent together. I request you to kindly consider my petition and lend me one months time. Waiting to receive a positive reply. Yours faithfully Josh Cardinal.
Dear Mr Brown,

This is to inform you that, I am Mr Josh Cardinal who is renting one of your flat in
Great britain
eastern colony. My reason of writing this letter is that, recently due
to to
this
pandamic
situation
i
will not be able to pay the rent.
However
, as you know that
i
am your loyal customer and always pay you the rent
before hand
. I am
affraid
that this time it would not be the same.

In addition
to this, as you know that
i
am a business
man
and
selfemployed
, my whole business work on credit basis.
Furthermore
, due to this epidemic all the funds which was about to
come
has
been delayed
by my customers.

However
,
i
am about to receive my business insurance by the
first
week of
next
month which is in August 2021.
Although
i
even have my
Fix
deposits
that is
about
to released
by the
end
of this month.

I
further
assure you that,
i
will
definately
pay both months rent together. I request you to kindly consider my petition and lend me one months time.

Waiting to receive a
positive
reply.

Yours
faithfully


Josh Cardinal.
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IELTS letter You are experiencing financial problem write a letter to your landlord

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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