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complaint letter recommended car from your agency

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My name i We have met each other during my recent visit at to your office regarding the car rent/renting the car. I am writing this letter in order to lodge a complaint concerning the recommended car I got received from your agency. When After I collected it from your city branch and drove to the highway, I noticed that the steering wheel vibration vibrated heavily at 80 km/h and thus, I was not able unable to drive the car at a speed with the speed of more than 70 km/h. As a result, Hence, I spent almost three hours more on the highway, which was terrible to drive on for so long in the summer heat so long. Although I told your representative I required a dependable vehicle as I would be making a long journey and he assured me that I would not have any mechanical difficulties with it. Currently, I am in downtown Calgary and I am going to return next Friday. I am afraid, I cannot come back return with the same vehicle, however/though. So please, do all the needful anything needed to replace this car by that time, or I feel that I am entitled to request a full refund no later than upcoming Wednesday, as I will have to book return tickets beforehand. If you will be able to manage find me a replacingement the car, I am ready to/can share my exact location details via WhatsApp. I would greatly appreciate your help and I look forward to your quick response.
My name i We have met each other during my recent visit at to your office regarding the
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car
rent/renting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. I am writing this letter in order to lodge a complaint concerning the recommended
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
I
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got
received from your agency. When After I collected it from your city branch and drove to the highway, I noticed that the steering wheel vibration vibrated
heavily
at 80 km/h and
thus
, I was not able unable to drive the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
at a speed with the speed of more than 70 km/h.
As a result
,
Hence
, I spent almost three hours more on the highway, which was terrible to drive on for
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so
long in the summer heat
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so
long. Although I
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told
your representative I required a dependable vehicle as I would be making a long
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journey and
he assured me that I would not have any mechanical difficulties with it.

Currently
, I am in downtown
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Calgary and
I am going to return
next
Friday. I am afraid, I cannot
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come
back return with the same vehicle,
however
/though.
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So
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please
, do all the needful anything needed to replace this
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car
by that time, or I feel that I
am entitled
to request a full refund no later than upcoming Wednesday, as I will
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have to
book return tickets beforehand.

If you will be able to manage find me a
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replacingement
the
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car
, I am ready to/can share my exact location
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
via WhatsApp.

I would
greatly
appreciate your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and I look forward to your quick response.
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IELTS letter complaint letter recommended car from your agency

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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