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letter to a friend about the camping holiday

letter to a friend about the camping holiday aE30X

Dear hmin, Hope you're doing well. I am writing this to give you some suggestions for your camping vacation. As this is your first camping holiday this summer, you will really enjoy the hot sun escaping from the daily chores and feel relaxed. Moreover, you can also feel the warmth of campfire in the evening but don't forget the insect repellent cream. While you are on your holiday, don't expose yourself too much in sun which might cause you sunburn. One more thing, take care of yourself while lighting the campfire. I would love to join you for the holiday, unfortunately I am unable to make it. As you know, I am swamped with my work due to the shortage of workforce in my team which makes me to work on weekends. I am really sorry for not coming with you. Let me know if you need any other help. Best wishes, harsha

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hmin
,

Hope you're doing well. I am writing this to give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suggestions for your camping vacation.

As this is your first
 camping holiday this summer, you will really
 enjoy the hot sun escaping from the daily chores and feel relaxed. Moreover
, you can also
 feel the warmth of campfire in the evening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 don't forget the insect repellent cream.

While you are on your holiday, don't expose yourself too much in sun which might cause you sunburn. One more thing, take care of yourself while lighting the campfire.

I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you for the holiday, unfortunately I am unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it. As you know, I am swamped
 with my work due to the shortage of workforce in my team which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me to work on weekends. I am really
 sorry for not coming with you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know if you need any other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
.

Best wishes,

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harsha