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Write a letter apologising for the damage Persian rug and offering to get it cleaned

Write a letter apologising for the damage Persian rug and offering to get it cleaned gDREd

Dear Alice, I am writing to you to apologise for the disgraceful conduct from you and your family members on weekends. I realise how much this must have upset you, and I hope that we can sort out the problem agreeably. When I was bringing a drink, I was accidentally pushed and the drank spilled on the Persian rug. I did not expect that to happen and I was in a much worse situation. I felt so sorry for this priceless rug. The worst part is that I am guilty in front of your family members as well. I assure you that I will clean the carpet soon or cover the damage. Love, Mary

Dear Alice, I am writing to you to Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.apologize
apologise
 for the disgraceful conduct from you and your family members on weekends. I Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
realise
 how much this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have upset you, and I hope that we can sort out the problem agreeably
. When I was bringing a drink, I was accidentally
 pushed and the drank spilled on the Persian rug. I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 that to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).happen, and
happen and
 I was in a much worse situation. I felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry for this priceless rug. The worst part is that I am guilty in front of your family members as well
. I assure you that I will clean the carpet This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 or cover the damage. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
, Mary