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Write a letter apologising for the damage Persian rug and offering to get it cleaned

Write a letter apologising for the damage Persian rug and offering to get it cleaned gDREd
Dear Alice, I am writing to you to apologise for the disgraceful conduct from you and your family members on weekends. I realise how much this must have upset you, and I hope that we can sort out the problem agreeably. When I was bringing a drink, I was accidentally pushed and the drank spilled on the Persian rug. I did not expect that to happen and I was in a much worse situation. I felt so sorry for this priceless rug. The worst part is that I am guilty in front of your family members as well. I assure you that I will clean the carpet soon or cover the damage. Love, Mary
Dear Alice, I am writing to you to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for the disgraceful conduct from you and your family members on weekends. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.
realise
how much this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have upset you, and I hope that we can sort out the problem
agreeably
. When I was bringing a drink, I was
accidentally
pushed and the drank spilled on the Persian rug. I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
that to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
happen and
I was in a much worse situation. I felt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sorry for this priceless rug. The worst part is that I am guilty in front of your family members
as well
. I assure you that I will clean the carpet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
or cover the damage.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
, Mary

IELTS letter Write a letter apologising for the damage Persian rug and offering to get it cleaned

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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